almost killed!

[no1fear]

An early Sunday morning and i was taking a stroll through the forests of Sablewood and i hear rustling in the trees, i look up and there is a black figure mid jump. i go to draw my sword but he throws a dagger straight into my forehead handle first.

I come round and its almost night fall, i'm in a tree top house with windows out into the nearby desert.
my first thought is "where am i?"

A deep rumbling voice from outside "come in I have something to show you"
another voice, closer now "well its about time, I was ready to give up"
"No not just yet, this one looks promising"

The place i had presumed to be vines opened up and two of the most fearsome Syccans I had ever seen walked in.

"Well, well, well" said the first one "look who's woken up"

"He's a Syccan" Said the second.

"Yes, I know we shouldn't take prisoners of our own kind Orndal, but i didn't know that when i hit him. And i cant just let him stroll off to Whitehold and tell them about us can I?"

"Yes thats true, so what is your plan now, Slinter?"

"I'll tell you tomorrow, come at sun rise"

[no1fear]

going to do more parts but just seeing if its worth it tell me if i should do more of it

[kalki]

((No1fear this is quite good but a few friendly tips, go into more detail about the people and places. Describe the people as in "He had a grey beard speckled with white hairs, deep brown eyes and a scar on his left eyebrow." also things like this should go in the journals and biographies or group role-play, But really good!))

[jammx]

((Wrong place for this -_-))

[no1fear]

ok i'll do the next one in the right place
(and go into more detail)
do u want me to delete this one?

[jammx]

((I Don't really care anymore.))

[no1fear]

ok