Post by gkash on Mar 16, 2012 19:28:52 GMT -5
This is what I have so far.
Hope you like it. Please inform me of any errors in grammar.
"I'm leaving... I'm leaving... don't mind me father!" Said a boy as old as the age of seven. "Son, you better be leaving... i have important work to do!" The boy left his father's study and went down to the grounds of the mansion they owned. As the boy stepped out of the doors he walked to the small patch of farmland him and his family owned. He picked up a rusty iron hoe and swung it around aimlessly, thinking it was a sword and he was a mighty warrior! He swung at a tree and got the hoe stuck inside of it.
The boy sighed and put his hands on the stick part of the hoe. He pulled and pulled until the hoe flew out of the tree and on the ground. Th boy picked it up and walked to the wheat farm and started to harvest the wheat that was ready for harvesting. after finishing the harvesting of the wheat he walked back into the house with wheat in hand. He walked to the kitchen and put the wheat on the counter and walked away upstairs.
As he finally got upstairs he went into his room and and shut the door silently. He sat down in his wood chair and put his hands on his forehead and temples.
The boy was thinking hard, Thinking about his future and what would be in it, Thinking about why he had a strange last name, Why he had to be called, "Elric Shadowthief." All these random questions started pouring into his mind and started random experiences. What could this boy do in the future? he was just son of regular people, what was so special about the name, "Elric Shadowthief?"
They boy was thinking way too hard and went on thinking about his name. This name was to odd, strange, Dangerous! but why? what's wrong with having Shadowthief at the end of a name? apparently everything! Ryan fell asleep after thinking so much on his desk and woke up to his father shaking him roughly. "Elric, Elric get up!" it's time i should show you something!" Elric slowly got up from the chair and followed his father into the cellar. His father moved a bunch of crates and barrels to reveal a hidden lever. as his father pulled it some stone moved away and what Elric saw amazed him. Under the mansion there was a hole complex of life-like people and swords on racks and sticks. Armor was held up on walls and training dummies were set up at the far end of the room.
"Father, what is this?" asked the boy hesitantly. "This, This my son is a training room. A place where you can learn how to fight. A place to earn knowledge. A place to learn to defend yourself and other people!" said his father proudly. "I built this after your mother died. I still remember her because she was the greatest woman i ever have known! Elric, my son, listen i will teach you everything you need to know. If someone kills me and tries to kill you, you'll be ready! if someone tries to hurt your friends! you'll be ready!" His father walked to a weapon case and pulled out the most elegant iron blade in all of their village.
"Take this son... I hand my sword, The Winter's Delight, to you... please, keep it Elric. in memory of me if i die!"
The next mornic Elric woke, but not in his bed. He was in the back of a waggon heading to prison.
Elric, confused, searched. "What is this? Whats happening? Why am I here? I did nothing!" Crying, he started to beat on the back door of the waggon. The waggon stopped. "What do you think you are doing back there boy?", a scratchy voice yelled. Elric heard footsteps. It sounded like a giant. "BOOM" "BOOM" "BOOM" Elric was scared. He backed in to the corner farthest from the door. He pulled his shirt over his face too terrified to watch. The door opened. Silence. He waited about 30 seconds. Finally, he slowly pulled his shirt out from over his face and looked around. No one was there. Just as he started to get up a hand went over his face and dragged him out of the waggon. As he was fighting to get out of the character's grasp he noticed the waggon driver. He lay on the ground beside the waggon with his throat slit. Elric started to relax. "Do you want to die boy?", said a strange woman. "No, who are you?" Elric turned around. "Who are you?", said Elric. "I am Veronica, Veronica Clemmence", said Veronica. "Why did you save me?", said Elric. "I was a friend of your fathers." "My father? Was? Did something happen?" "Meet me in Talarra, I will explain everything." Wait, don't go! What is Talarra?" Veronica vanished in to the mist.
Hope you like it. Please inform me of any errors in grammar.
"I'm leaving... I'm leaving... don't mind me father!" Said a boy as old as the age of seven. "Son, you better be leaving... i have important work to do!" The boy left his father's study and went down to the grounds of the mansion they owned. As the boy stepped out of the doors he walked to the small patch of farmland him and his family owned. He picked up a rusty iron hoe and swung it around aimlessly, thinking it was a sword and he was a mighty warrior! He swung at a tree and got the hoe stuck inside of it.
The boy sighed and put his hands on the stick part of the hoe. He pulled and pulled until the hoe flew out of the tree and on the ground. Th boy picked it up and walked to the wheat farm and started to harvest the wheat that was ready for harvesting. after finishing the harvesting of the wheat he walked back into the house with wheat in hand. He walked to the kitchen and put the wheat on the counter and walked away upstairs.
As he finally got upstairs he went into his room and and shut the door silently. He sat down in his wood chair and put his hands on his forehead and temples.
The boy was thinking hard, Thinking about his future and what would be in it, Thinking about why he had a strange last name, Why he had to be called, "Elric Shadowthief." All these random questions started pouring into his mind and started random experiences. What could this boy do in the future? he was just son of regular people, what was so special about the name, "Elric Shadowthief?"
They boy was thinking way too hard and went on thinking about his name. This name was to odd, strange, Dangerous! but why? what's wrong with having Shadowthief at the end of a name? apparently everything! Ryan fell asleep after thinking so much on his desk and woke up to his father shaking him roughly. "Elric, Elric get up!" it's time i should show you something!" Elric slowly got up from the chair and followed his father into the cellar. His father moved a bunch of crates and barrels to reveal a hidden lever. as his father pulled it some stone moved away and what Elric saw amazed him. Under the mansion there was a hole complex of life-like people and swords on racks and sticks. Armor was held up on walls and training dummies were set up at the far end of the room.
"Father, what is this?" asked the boy hesitantly. "This, This my son is a training room. A place where you can learn how to fight. A place to earn knowledge. A place to learn to defend yourself and other people!" said his father proudly. "I built this after your mother died. I still remember her because she was the greatest woman i ever have known! Elric, my son, listen i will teach you everything you need to know. If someone kills me and tries to kill you, you'll be ready! if someone tries to hurt your friends! you'll be ready!" His father walked to a weapon case and pulled out the most elegant iron blade in all of their village.
"Take this son... I hand my sword, The Winter's Delight, to you... please, keep it Elric. in memory of me if i die!"
The next mornic Elric woke, but not in his bed. He was in the back of a waggon heading to prison.
Elric, confused, searched. "What is this? Whats happening? Why am I here? I did nothing!" Crying, he started to beat on the back door of the waggon. The waggon stopped. "What do you think you are doing back there boy?", a scratchy voice yelled. Elric heard footsteps. It sounded like a giant. "BOOM" "BOOM" "BOOM" Elric was scared. He backed in to the corner farthest from the door. He pulled his shirt over his face too terrified to watch. The door opened. Silence. He waited about 30 seconds. Finally, he slowly pulled his shirt out from over his face and looked around. No one was there. Just as he started to get up a hand went over his face and dragged him out of the waggon. As he was fighting to get out of the character's grasp he noticed the waggon driver. He lay on the ground beside the waggon with his throat slit. Elric started to relax. "Do you want to die boy?", said a strange woman. "No, who are you?" Elric turned around. "Who are you?", said Elric. "I am Veronica, Veronica Clemmence", said Veronica. "Why did you save me?", said Elric. "I was a friend of your fathers." "My father? Was? Did something happen?" "Meet me in Talarra, I will explain everything." Wait, don't go! What is Talarra?" Veronica vanished in to the mist.
