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Post by stuart123 on Apr 21, 2012 6:10:14 GMT -5
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Today I took a trip to East Sablewood, to collect some logs to sell in Dauer. I did so and now have some crowns. I ventured where I have not been before, I went to Verslun and spent the night in the inn. I awoke feeling refreshed and I don't know where I should go from here. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Stuart Vitali
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Post by no1fear on Apr 21, 2012 7:11:22 GMT -5
I think they should be longer. add all the little things that happened to you and use descriptive words. Include any characters you may have met
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Post by stuart123 on Apr 21, 2012 10:55:09 GMT -5
K i will thanks for the advice
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